Sunday, 5 February 2012
Magpie 103
When Esme sank into the mud
She held a prism of frozen blood,
And horrified, the passers-by
Had but one question: "Esme, why?
If this is all some kind of trick
We think your sense of humour's sick."
But Esme's fingers, tapering, sharp,
Are now elsewhere. And play the harp.
(With thanks to Magpie Tales for the picture)
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Lovely bit of poetry and I just LOVE the picture!
ReplyDeleteGood for Esme! Typical headstones are soooo boring...!lol
ReplyDeleteI prism of frozen blood...I love it...
ReplyDeleteLOVE IT!!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your rhyme and metre. It adds lightness to a weighted subject. Very nicely done, Francis. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGreat! A prism of frozen blood...love that.
ReplyDeleteYour humour is a stimulating cocktail - double wry.
ReplyDeleteLove it! :-)
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
smiles...may she rest in peace...
ReplyDeleteThe 'prism of frozen blood' is an elemental image that could burst forth in many directions. Fine piece.
ReplyDeleteSuch a good one.
ReplyDelete=)
indeed a very good poeem...thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThis was a good poem, no joke...
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Wander
"Frozen blood".. Wonderful imagery!
ReplyDeleteprism of frozen blood..love it...and now Esme's fingers play the harp
ReplyDeleteLaughing in appreciation here...
ReplyDeleteWitty and sharp as that prism!
ReplyDeleteYour sense of humour is sharp and wonderfully funny!!!
ReplyDeleteLovely stuff!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Great entertainment.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, everyone. I'm not a poet, but I do enjoy writing my Magpies!
ReplyDeleteDear Frances: Lovely abstract vision of those "stuck in the mud" with their heart still on their sleeve...no the feeling~! A funny and sweet poem of LOVE; LOVE IT~!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Chiccoreal!
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