Sunday, 29 January 2012
When Geoffrey took his car apart
He found inside a beating heart,
And vowed that he would never drive
A vehicle that was still alive.
But Geoff's not one to make a fuss.
He now goes everywhere by bus.
(With thanks to Magpie Tales for the pirture)
Posted by Frances Garrood at 15:03
Labels: Magpie Tales
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That was cute. Thanks for the smile :)ReplyDelete
Wow! It's amazing what people see. I think Kandinsky would be pleased.ReplyDelete
I do like the funny ones. Thanks Frances.ReplyDelete
Love it! Made me giggle.ReplyDelete
very well written story.ReplyDelete
Nice take on the beating heart ~ReplyDelete
Very creative ~
I think it will be different for me. I need to drive soon. :-)ReplyDelete
I enjoyed your poem. It's joyful to read and I think joy is the essence of this painting. Thank you for sharing.ReplyDelete
I like that :-)ReplyDelete
are you saying the bus has no heart...smiles...i love public transit actually...such cool people to meet...ReplyDelete
Round of applause for a fellow humourist!ReplyDelete
Love it - made me smile.ReplyDelete
I think you need to put together a collection of these, Frances!ReplyDelete
I can see that.ReplyDelete
Yep, I liked it.ReplyDelete
Frances, I look so forward to your poetry ... thanks for keeping us entertained.ReplyDelete
Thank goodness for laughter... :)ReplyDelete
Thanks for all those comments, eveyrone. I am NOT a poet (and have never pretended to be one) but can manage short and sily. On a good day.ReplyDelete
And if the weathe's really nice, he'llReplyDelete
Get there on his on his bicycle!