ROOM TO LET
She said, "this will do,
And it's got a nice view.
But it's big, and, well, bijou it ain't."
He corrected her grammar
And said (with his stammer),
"It just needs some p-p-p-paint."
(The best I could do after a week of visitors. Thanks once again to Tess at Magpie Tales for the picture.)
Funny! You are such a clever grammarian.
ReplyDeleteA bijou Mag, though! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jinksy!
DeleteFine writing, with a nice rhythmic beat.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Berowne
DeleteIt does indeed ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment, Grace!
DeleteIf she doesn't want to rent the room, I will!! It's so lovely!! The funniest line is the painting needing some paint. You are so clever, Frances. Thank you once again for this Sunday joy!! =D
ReplyDeleteYou're very kind, Linda. Not one of my best, I'm afraid!
DeleteSuper cute. :)
ReplyDeletevery fun read- and yes! Paint is a miracle worker!
ReplyDeletePaint is great, Katherine, but I always manage to paint myself as well...
DeleteSorry about the change of name, Kathe. It was the spell check's idea!
DeleteLOL Enjoyed it tremendously!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ritva!
DeleteLoverly!
ReplyDeleteYou're very kind , Susan!
DeleteI like it! Cool, concise, nutshell.
ReplyDeleteGreat rhythmn - love it.
ReplyDeleteYou are so clever. Your Magpies are always delightful.
ReplyDelete=)
That's very kind, Sue!
DeleteLovely fun stuff Frances.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks for making me smile Frances! :-)
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Carrie!
ReplyDelete